I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School, Wellington, NZ. I am in Room 13 and a member of the amazing Pouakai Syndicate. My teacher is Ms Tito.

Sunday, 18 November 2012


My little sister Sienna is one of the most important things in my world. I would do pretty much anything in the world for her. Like go to chipmunks for her 6th birthday party.


It was a horrible rainy Saturday morning. When I walked  in  I thought I was going to go deaf. The crying the screaming and yelling I just could not take  it. As soon as we sat down my sister Sienna saw her friend Sophie and they both sprinted to the slide. It looked so much fun but I  was to old. People took a long time to get here but I did not know why. It was nearly time to go to the party room and eat. But then I realised something bad.

"Oh No"

"What is it" says my Mum

"I  wrote the wrong time on the invitation" I say very worried

"Is that why people are running late?" My mum said.


But it did not matter everyone is here now so everything is fine. Time for lunch!

Getting all the kids was hard since I lost everyone but when I found everyone it was OK. I was a bit jealous of the kids since they had food and I did not I mean what if I wanted some juice? When Charlie the chipmunk came I was kind of scared of him but he was not here for long. We had cake and it was time to play again.

The slide I was standing there eyeing it up it looked so bouncy and so fun. I just could not help it. I just had to got on it.I climbed up it looking out for little kids and then it was my turn.I bounced on it and then
Wosh! I went down really fast. As soon as i got of I was fighting with a little kid about how I was allowed to go on it. But then I was saved by my dad because he wanted me so that was good.

One by one the kids left and I got tired. We could finally go home. 

I had a good time at my sisters birthday I made new 5 year old friends they were all so cute but I just wanted to go home. 

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